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heart in rhyme (the poet's voice)
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heart in rhyme (the poet's voice) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the voice of the poet speaks to me in the silence of the night telling of loves gone wrong and of hearts made right she speaks with a voice so clear, so soft and so sweet that upon hearing it, my life is made complete she tells me of her life, and shares with me her heart and every word, every line she speaks, is a work of art proclaiming in those words how she faced her fears how she rose and met them, battled through the tears now she stands here again with part of her life's story she asks not for fame and she asks not for glory all she asks is for one moment of your time to listen to her words, and hear her heart in rhyme --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a very sensitive poem. Thank you Joyce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir Sven....where did THIS lovely gem come from... O Poet, how you write! and like a soft glove's challenge to those other poets, to hold forth the light, and show the way... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Sir Sven... such a beautiful way of writing... I am in awe... Regards to you, my friend, Sudhir |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very beautiful story.....thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved reading this sensitive penned piece. thank you for sharing. Charisma |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I could just imagine her standing speaking with you. Only one so intuned to others hearts can write as you do. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sven you write from within a woman's heart so nicely, you sensitive devil you. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You know that feeling when someone says something so incredibly amazing that for a swiftly sweet moment, everything pauses and sparkles? Feels as if someone grabbed your heart itself and gave it a hug... Your words do that, especially these. Magical Sven Pen.  In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I'm at a complete loss of words. Sven, this is beautiful.  "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Sven, you are such a sensitive poet, this was yet another lovely poem. KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"All she ask for is a moment of your time." Very nice Sven...you have my moment and this was a pleasure to read....James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, THANK YOU, sweet sven for writing me this lovely verse... hehe... of COURSE i want people to hear me... rofl *grin but even though you didn't really write it for me, i still LOVE it!!! ..... (doesn't take much, does it? *wink*) LOL seriously, very nicely done, my friend |
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Isabella Junior Member
since 2001-03-22
Posts 16Confusion |
You have just described the perfect foreplay........enjoyed very much. Belle |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Joyce, thank you for reading. . . Sunshine, where did this come from?? I think you know where. . . thank you my friend. . . Sudhir, my friend. . . I have you in awe??? Thank you!!! Nate, any time my friend. . . thanks for reading!!! Charisma, thank you my friend. . . inot2B, could you tell me a little about that picture you have in your mind??? Thank you my friend. . . PK, thank you. . . sensitive?? Yes. . . devil?? No. . .  . . . LOLTemptress, yes, I know that feeling. . . and I'm glad that you got that from this. . . thank you. . . Just a Woman, I left you at a loss for words??? Wow. . . . . . thank you!!Kate, thank you for the blessings. . . and thank you for reading. . . vandana, thank you my friend!!! James, thank you for your moment. . . I appreciate it my friend. . . doreen, you're welcome. . . how did you know?? guess I'm pretty transparent huh??? . . . *you're too funny!!*. . . thank you so much my friend. . . Isabella, the perfect foreplay?? Wow. . . thank you!!! ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sven, This is wonderful. Such nice work. Thanks. Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
she is very lucky she has your poet voice in which to tell of her words....beautiful Sven.. Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
Sven, what a soft, beautiful way of writing you have. seems you can reach right out and touch the reader with your words. very nicely done |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
So eloquently put, sven. Lovely. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
shameless bump  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Michael, you're welcome my friend. . . Greeneyes, thank you. . . but I would say that I would be the lucky one. . . would she exist. . . tradewind, thank you. . . I'm glad that you got that feeling. . . Angel, thank you my friend. . . Temptress, a shameless bump??? LOL Thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
Very, very, very, very GOOD! Very original in content. May His glory be fresh within me. May my heart be renewed in His hand. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You keep getting better all the time. Excellent write. Sy |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful, touching,and sincere...i loved the poem...thanks for sharing it...sven...enjoyed as always if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When my sleep is broken And I shake from nightmares, I turn on the computer Lose my troubles and cares In the words of poets. With some, I sympathize Others astonish With sweet coated lies. I cry, I laugh, I'm touched in some way Without sleep, I'm refreshed For another day. I love your poem, Sven... and hope you don't mind my thoughts wandering. *S* (Now if only I had a poet to cuddle, the computer would stay lonely! LOL.) |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Very poetic poem. I loved it. LP let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am late but i did pay attention |
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