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RMW
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0 posted 2001-04-30 05:36 PM


Aspen

Aspen stand together.
In summer,
When the sun prefers the meadow,
And the grass leans forward
As though warming to attention
At a church social,
They twitter near the edge.
Later,
When the sedge has frozen,
And the moon is but imagination
Peeking over the horizon,
They reflect in ponds,
Breathless with the excitement of their own lace
Undergarments.

RMW

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-30 05:44 PM


Yes...this is Aspen....and Yes...Aspen twitters...

how well you have captured this!

RMW
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2 posted 2001-05-01 12:03 PM


Sunshine....thank you very much for the kind words. They really do seem to twitter don't they. Bob
S Arthur Grey
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3 posted 2001-05-01 12:12 PM


"when the sun prefers the meadow"
Enjoyed your images.  Refreshing.

S Arthur

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4 posted 2001-05-01 12:28 PM


RMW~
Such a lovely, lovely offering.
Much enjoyment of this piece.
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-05-01 12:41 PM


Beautiful Images....very peaceful...


Greeneyes~


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RMW
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6 posted 2001-05-01 08:43 AM


S Arthur, Marge, and Greeneyes.....thank you all for taking a moment. Bob
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