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into the still of pond |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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All in time as time comes due then all shall be revealed and even those not too astute will see what's been concealed Even though perceptions bend even the light of truth still I pray your heart will mend and all your wicked deeds undo. Look well into the still of pond to truly see your face and should you see past your self you'll see the water's grace... For in this hole of soul fulfilled is emptiness of heart's imbue and every drop of water there is a tear that fell for you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ For a moment - I looked at the title and thought we were going on a fishing trip ... And then I found this graceful, tender read. Very lovely, hon. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a lovely poem, coming from a lovely soul. Joyce |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
The title was very well thought-out, and I did like the last few lines. Very creative scene you displayed here.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i dig the depth and the images get me right *here*... i know just what this is like i enjoyed the rhythm on this one too... calm, serene, and pond-esque "Many great relationships start or end in a bar. |
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