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Our Minds Entwined
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Our Minds Entwined |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Far from the physical Space where our shells perform Puppets on mental strings These most glorious things Find a way to keep the bodies warm Ever the constant illusion Of reality out of reach Cold comfort though Cold winds blow Our minds yet, never breached Suffer these, the hallowed Times in which we dwell Far beyond physical More than mystical Than these earthen, dusty shells No magic words be spoken Nor given an outward sign We become As one When our minds become entwined |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We become As one When our minds become entwined" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That, my dear, is just too cool of an idea....I really like this...sets my mind spinning  SEA |
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ForwardSearching Junior Member
since 2001-03-23
Posts 35 |
"As one When our minds become entwined" Great one PK, shows a side of love we all forget sometime. Enjoyed it! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Far from the physical Space where our shells perform Puppets on mental strings These most glorious things Find a way to keep the bodies warm Ever the constant illusion Of reality out of reach Our minds yet, never breached Suffer these, the hallowed Times in which we dwell Far beyond physical More than mystical Than these earthen, dusty shells ========================== We become As one When our minds become entwined ============================ entwining with your poetic mind tis a most inspiring way to start ones day *S* this one is engraved in my mind... as I have always admired the imagery and conception of thoughts within the 1st and 3rd verse ... those are some very cool and unique, clever lines PK. and of course the emotions and cadence are easy on the mind as well  another gem and fave. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most insightful write....well done Sir! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you've stirred up something with this one........as soon as I have a chance to settle my mind tonight....it will come together SEA ( I know, settling my mind is a scary thought LOL) |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Me? Stirred something up? I hope its a tasty drink. *L* And please don't settle your mind SEA, keep it shaken, not stirred. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
... you have a talent with words and phrasing and this piece proves it.... thank you for posting |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes!!! This is excellent. . . showing that the intertwining of minds is as important as the intertwining of bodies. . . Perfect PK. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, so there isn't enough time in my day to settle my mind.....so now, it's shaken..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one very much... Entwined minds isn't just a sensual thought... it's a necessity for long term smiles! *S* |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very well done... Jamie |
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