Open Poetry #13 |
Dancing In The Rain |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dancing In The Rain We may find ourselves reacting within the emotions of preconceived notions. Perhaps judging present occasions from the viewpoint of past situations. As some would say we are jaded by experiences from a previous day. Like sinking in slimy quicksand we may find ourselves swallowed up in the cares of this world. We all share the undesirability and sorrow of pain. Some will make the pain their friend and some will run away. I'm sure we can all agree that lessons are required to be learned and respect must be earned. And when trouble does arise you need to be strong to survive. And never fear change because without a doubt there is always a way out. If we truly desire to find the way to start a new day it may be necessary to throw out the garbage from the past and begin to view the world anew from a fresh perspective. If we could focus on the desire to know love and to show love smiles would come easier and days would be cheerier. Believe in the survivability of friendships and embrace the ability and nobility we all have within our souls to be concerned and care for one another. And trust in the resilience of love. Believe it is stronger than anything life can send our way. Allow the desires of love to grow in your heart uninhibited and unrestrained and let the beauty of love find you dancing in the rain. Jameslee@April29,2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments James! You have some wonderful internal rhyming in this piece, and much wisdom ... very much enjoyed your thoughts in this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - if I had your wisdom, perhaps a few more smiles would be on this face. Thanks for sharing this, I read and received a lot from it. BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ummm, prose in poetry! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A lot going on here, I enjoyed |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
point taken. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
THIS is wonderful...YOU are wonderful...now lets go to the beach and dance.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
who am I to say no???? wonderful James. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I enjoyed this beautiful piece very much James...a very good write!! Nathan |
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