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Astir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Astir A troubled heart, unspoken words a kiss of rhyme, with thoughts astir. I journeyed far, my depth of you in endless stream, to cross for two. I walk my dreams and run my days to bathe in you in graying haze, awakening a stir in mind etched in passion, a forever find to conquer now, before the then I'm born of breath to love again. To capture you, in eyes of night relive my dreams, embracing light, escaping all, but love's transfer I am each morning, all astir. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
The flow of this is perfect! Wow...just really like this one a lot! Great job!  SEA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you SEA..it really was inspired by Poetic Knight's response to a poem of mine.but I didn't want to mention it in the title...he has a special way with words and it led to this poem this morning..all I can offer today... thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
All astir, wow now I am too. This was an enjoyable poem to read, almost melodic. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank You, Poetic Sir...I wanted to peek in before I left for the day to see if you noticed it....  have a nice one...~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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