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0 posted 2001-04-28 05:53 PM


Sparrows Never Stop Singing
By: Noah Eaton
4/28/01


Sparrows never stop singing
Promising vicissitudes
Time can vindicate the ailing
With an orioles sweet monsoon

Promising vicissitudes
Jaywalking for love of God
With an orioles sweet monsoon
Faith blocking evil, justice sought

Jaywalking for love of God
Hearing His great voice echo
Faith blocking evil, justice sought
Self-love is what makes a heart gold

Hearing His great voice echo
Time can vindicate the ailing
Self-love is what makes a heart gold
Sparrows never stop singing


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1 posted 2001-04-28 07:43 PM


Excellent Pantoum Noah.  These are fun to do, but I find to be one of the harder forms of poetry.  Well done.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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