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VAS
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0 posted 2001-04-28 12:29 PM


Burst from Heaven
Virginia Salter

Deeper grows the gray
as the rumble, crash and groan of day
fills this orb, this piece of earth
rocks demeanor, steals one’s mirth

Then...the burst from heaven falls
pelting all within its call.
Rivulets form, begin their flow
watch them, down the street they go!

Dancing in car-roof-top play
higher, higher join the fray.
Faster, faster fall to fly
as the clouds go crawling by.

As their all is spent so fast
to a trickle storm’s spell is cast.
Drumming turns to strumming
as light filters in, numbing

The senses in awe of what has come
the mind, the heart struck fully dumb.
Surely no view can quite compare
to the feel and color of the air

Beyond the storm into the light
a glinting contrast to the night.
Outside the window, drink-laden leaves,
sparkle as starlight in the breeze.

Clouds above turn soft gray and white
as heaven twinkles through its light
Bits of joy brighten well my soul
as thunders cease to make their roll.

©April 28, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-28 04:14 PM


They certainly come on fast, don't they! Enjoyed!
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2 posted 2001-04-28 04:36 PM


VAS,
Nice write, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2001-04-28 04:54 PM


I did so enjoy this We have these sudden down pours in Washington too.  And it's always so beautiful when the sun comes out.  Joyce
VAS
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4 posted 2001-04-28 06:22 PM


Thank you all, very much!  I'm so happy you enjoyed this one.
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