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Soft-Charred Memories Reflected
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Soft-Charred Memories Reflected |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Soft-Charred Memories Reflected ~*Marge Tindal*~ Soft-charred memories in the fire Stir the ash of scorched desire Ever-embered to remain In hearth of heart To burn again Again to burn In heart of hearth To remain ever-embered The stir of desire scorched ash Memories in the fire soft-charred ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Very interesting, Marge, very interesting indeed. Tempting, this, I've never tried it. Fun, no? S Arthur |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I found this an intriguing post. And a good poem. Joyce |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, This is just as amazing as it gets... has a mark of the 'Marge' that I know, creative and masterly magic... Great... Regards, Sudhir |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Sometimes you are just downright scarey, Marge. There seems to be no end to your creativity. Very nice! Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SArthur~ Welcome to Passions ! As you get to know me - you'll find that I love to 'play' with words. Oh ... when I grow up I want to be a poet !  Joyce~ Thank you. I love the veil of intrigue. Just having fun playing !  Sudhir~ You are a doll to stop by the playground and leave such sweet praise. You know I do not take it lightly, my friend.  PackRatMike~ 'Scarey' ? You been talking to my kids ? LOL ! Thanks. Seems I've been caught playing in the sandbox again ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Soft-charred memories"... Quite a visual here, my friend... Nicely done indeed..  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Images of a fire on a beach.......late at night......listening to the roar of the ocean.....missing that certain someone....Marge, you sure do have a way......  SEA |
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ForwardSearching Junior Member
since 2001-03-23
Posts 35 |
Nice imagery Marge, the heart never forgets! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now how can a moth resist this ones heat... very cool and clever Margie... love ya when ya play with poetry and fire  Smoke and ashes baby...leave em smoldering.(wink) oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, when you ARE a poet, call the rest of us to look in and see what miraculous change has taken place, because this, my dear, is all I need to make me happy... and when I grow up? You know the rest.... |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
very creative along with such great images very nice work! |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Marge, you are so creative and I am in awe of your gift. Wonderful play with words. Blessings, Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I love it when you play with words...this was magic! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and I love it too when you play with words, its always great to see your creations. thanks for sharing my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thanks. It was a pleasurable 'play'. SEA~ Oh - Oh ! On neon waves Pressing the shore Your tide ebbs me further Than I've been before ForwardSearching~ Thank you for dropping in on this one. Welcome to the hearth. JanetMarie~ 'Smoldering' ... yeah ! You just a poet-a-holic ... Oh ! It's contagious isn't it ? Karilea~ Awwwwwww ! But ... ya' ain't making me go to 'grown-up' Nah ... I'm hovering. TradeWind~ Thank you. Your name is inspiration in itself ! (Yeah ... I might) Kate~ Oh - come and paly in the sandbox. I just let the words sift through my mind and am sometimes amazed at the fun things that gather. Thank you so much. Martie~ Always got room for a 'SIS' in the sandbox ! Kick those sandals off and get in here ! Charisma~ Ah - ha ! But it's even better to see your sweet smile here in the playground. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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