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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-27 01:44 PM


Sitting here talking to you
missing you, wanting you
Sitting here thinking of you
hours later, to long ago
Sitting here waiting for you
impatiently, worriedly
Sitting here dreaming about you
wishing, hoping

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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obscured vision
1 posted 2001-04-27 02:24 PM


hey hey!
ive never posted in here before......ive always gone to teens #4 but ive gone over my limit for the day in there so shhhhhhh!
thanx
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-04-27 02:25 PM


Welcome  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


PoeticKnight
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3 posted 2001-04-27 02:26 PM


Well welcome to Open 13. *L*
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4 posted 2001-04-27 02:29 PM


Well this was cute,,, Welcome
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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with you
5 posted 2001-04-27 06:14 PM


Tiffy girl..... I caught you! na, just playin.... this is great.....nice to see you in open....   SEA
PortuguesePoet
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6 posted 2001-04-27 06:26 PM


Simple poem that conveys emotion effectively. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
Tessa
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7 posted 2001-04-27 07:11 PM


You capture the many emotions of love.  Very nicely done.
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