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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Reach over & explore higher places of discernment with me close your eyes take another leap of faith I will catch you on wings softer than melodic phrases whispered softly on tempered winds Come, let's find again our place At the center where voilins play achingly sweet songs that pierces hearts & gives the willow a reason to weep Remember how fairies danced tip toed over xylophonic symphony & the nightingale sang beautifully into approaching night Then just as we thought we were lost fireflies lit the darkness & the moon began it's haunting melody to accompany us home were we not happy then? Take my hand, as once before explore with me that special place meant only for you & I *Leap*, together we'll fall in love all over again... -Tier{R.T.} 4/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is sooooo beautiful  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...take another leap of faith... exactly! Thank you for this! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Tiersden? R.T.? Is this the R.T. from Papa's? Lovely poem, very lovely. There's only one thing, IMO, that detracted. The language brings a level of wisdom and sophistication all through the piece, lending one to believe experience has created the sincere depth of understanding in the words spoken. Yet, the "tippy toed" phrase is almost a little too playful, child-like not to detract. I'm wondering if "tip-toed" would fit better. Try it, if ya don't like it...it's your poem above all! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awww.... shucks! *kicks at the cyberdust* Thank you muchly, SEA! *grins* Goodmorning Sunshine, you do just that! who will say no? *hugs* Yep! it's me Virginia! *smiles* how are you? and thank you! I like your idea very much! *big hugs* -Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
close your eyes take another leap of faith I will catch you on wings softer than melodic phrases whispered softly on tempered winds Come, let's find again our place At the center where voilins play achingly sweet songs that pierces hearts & gives the willow a reason to weep Remember how fairies danced tip toed over xylophonic symphony & the nightingale sang beautifully into approaching night Then just as we thought we were lost fireflies lit the darkness & the moon began it's haunting melody to accompany us home =================== Tiersdin..the imagery in this is wonderful... lovely and uniquely painted... the whole poem has such a well written ethereal quality about it. very cool write Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Very well done and very well liked by this reader.*S* Mike |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Remember how fairies danced tip toed over xylophonic symphony & the nightingale sang beautifully into approaching night ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the nightingale’s song ushers in the dusky night heralding darkness Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Glad that you liked, Packrat! *wink* Very nicely said, Interloper, your poem should be posted so that everyone can read it! *smiles* -Tier |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"take another leap of faith I will catch you on wing softer than melodic phrases whispered softly on tempered winds" What a wonderful promise... and what great imagery! I like this very much... well done! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Surely love like this comes opnly in dreams. Beautiful. Joyce |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Suthern, and Joyce J, for taking the time to read and comment. I think that love like this can be very real... I know... *Smiles* |
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