A Heart Etched In The Sand

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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-27 12:14 PM

A heart declaring our love
Is etched upon the sand
As we stand and admire our artwork
We're together, hand in hand

The cold wind against our bodies
Really doesn't bother me that much
As I know I'll never really feel the cold
If I have the warmth of your touch

You wrap yourself around me
I'm imprisoned within your arms
How protected do I feel
As you keep me safe from harm

Seagulls fly above us
As they search upon the land
We stand and face each other
As the waves crash upon the sand

But so lost are we in each other
We two are just mesmerised
The deep blue color of the ocean
Is what I see now in your eyes

We hear the steady beating of wings
As the seagulls take to the skies
A look of happiness is what I see
As I gaze longingly into your eyes

As the night is drawing nearer
And the tide moves in so fast
We knew our heart in the sand
Could not be here to last

But our love is locked inside
Our hearts, now so content
Never will we forget this day
Or the treasured times we've spent

Suetang

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

1 posted 2001-04-27 01:17 AM

reminds me of a certian time i spent with the one i loved at myrtle beach. we did this. it was my first ever time at the ocean and she made it special. even though me and her have parted ways when ever i see the sea i think of her. beautiful work.
love ya
jesse

All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-27 10:14 PM

Very lovely images....

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

3 posted 2001-04-27 10:50 PM

lovely images portrayed with this. *s* nice writing.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2001-04-28 04:48 AM

Thank you one and all for all your kindness and I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate the time you took to read my work.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-01 03:56 PM

This is beautiful, how did I miss this one?

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-05-01 04:06 PM

You've expressed so well for us the love and romance of a beach. I dare a human to resist the pull of tides. Wonderful write.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-05-01 04:56 PM

Wonderful poem. Beach and love. Incomparable. Joyce

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

8 posted 2001-05-01 05:43 PM

WALKING HAND IN HAND, INFACT I'LL BE GOING THERE IN MID JUNE. I LOVED IT.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-05-01 10:03 PM

Irish Rose
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Julian
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work

Joyce
I get a lot of inspiration for my writing from going to the beach as you can see.

latin passion
It seems strange to imagine you walking along the beach in June as we freeze here in Australia in our Winter. Then again, it's pretty special walking along the beach any time of the year.

Take care one and all
Sue

Suetang

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