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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-04-26 06:10 PM



How could I ever
just pass you by
when everything you post
makes me sigh?

I don't know who
your pen is dancing for
but I love to read
and always want more

You write so sweet
~let it be clear~
no one should slander
a heart so dear

with every wonderful post
each clever reply
how could anyone
just pass you by?


~SEA
* Interloper, I'm sorry if anyone is talking unkind to you....

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-26 06:32 PM


I must have missed something, but this is  lovely poem to a friend.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-27 12:29 PM


I don't understand this one  either   except I too agree that  the words  penned by Interloper are always worth reading..*s  nice one SEA

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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3 posted 2001-04-27 09:33 AM





How you make me swoon
your words send my head reeling
and my heart flutters
~*~
Thank you O sweet SEA
I am flattered beyond words
you are a fine friend
~*~
Now my words failing
to convey such deep feelings
take my gratitude
~*~
I will ever write
what my heart will dictate
you live inside me
~*~
Such a poor attempt
to say what is on my mind
So I say ... THANK YOU


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.



[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-27-2001).]

SEA
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4 posted 2001-04-27 09:39 AM


Interloper~   you have always been so nice to me, when I read your poem, it made me angry to think of anyone talking bad about you....I just wanted to express how wonderful I think you are   I'm so happy you liked this    SEA
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5 posted 2001-04-27 09:55 AM


SEA....look at you, picking up hearts along the shoreline....

well done, little one!

SEA
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thank you Sunshine....
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7 posted 2001-04-27 12:28 PM


Hey, it's a party.  Just we three.  Let's ask in another guy... naw  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2001-04-27 12:48 PM


SEA, and this is why we treasure you so much with your heart filled with such compassion and love I gotta tell ya I too am touched by this poem you wrote for our friend Interloper...

And by the way if I brought along some sparkling wine and a tray of assorted cheese could I join you PoetFriends and tag along at the party...

hugs2uSweetie

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9 posted 2001-04-27 02:05 PM


See I am awake!  Interloper, I felt for you too, but Sea you took action, and good for you, as this is what being friends here is all about.  I love both of your work, so job well done, and hope your weekend is wonderful!  Group hug!  

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knightlyshadows
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10 posted 2001-04-27 02:13 PM


awww! *sniff* yall are all just so sweetish
lovely poem SEA!

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

OLIAS
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11 posted 2001-04-27 02:23 PM


A wonderful gift for a friend and a lovely poem thank you,

Regards,
Olias.

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12 posted 2001-04-27 02:33 PM


Of course wouldn't we expect anything else.
Ditto everyone
Great
Bernie
                       


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-27-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-04-27 09:08 PM


This was a beautiful poem ~sea~ I'm sure Interloper feels better to have a friend like you to stand by him. I too read "please just pass me by." LP
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14 posted 2001-04-27 09:13 PM


Pretty, Sea...we all need friends like you


jwesley

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15 posted 2001-04-27 09:16 PM


Beautiful and brave words, SEA!

Cor

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