Open Poetry #13 |
Show love's victory - senryu |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Reflections of love souls mirroring each other show love's victory Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is beautiful |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Excellent |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ It pales next to the beauty of SEA. Thanx Waseem ~ Thank you faithful friend. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Reflections of love souls mirroring each other show love's victory Two in submission No war to be fought and won Victory in love.. or Victory of love..not sure which *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I knew a couple like that.... very nice! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A masterpiece for sure! Bravo! well done! *smiles* -Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a lovely thought, 'souls mirroring each other' beautiful piece on 'love' |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wynter ~ Thank you for the fine, poetic response. Either way (of/in) there is Victory Sunshine ~ Thank you for the read. Tier ~ You are TOO kind. Hardly a masterpiece ... but I am pleased you like it VAS ~ Thank you for your kind response. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very well said. Michael Proust- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Michael ~ Thank you my friend. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
its beautiful you write wonderfully ben redshaw the great and deeply in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
To see soul to soul, surely has to be love's victory. Well done! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
The yin and the yang United, harmonious You pen perfection and I enjoyed it very much thank you. Regards Olias. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ben ~ Thank you very much. i believe this is your first comment on my work. Thanx for the read. Walker ~ Thank you for the read and the kind comment. Oliad ~ No, it is I who thank you for the read and kind comment. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
always so nice interloper.. A victory won. Captured in this looking glass For all to behold. |
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