Open Poetry #13 |
A Single Owl Feather |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
\ ~*~ A Single Owl Feather ~*~Art: Grandmother Moon - Debra Colburn Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Mysteria, I really liked this poem. It is beautiful. And you are also an artist in your presentation. Joyce |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Joyce thank you, but it is the artist's work that inspires me, and as someone once said to me, most of the work is already done by the artist when I write about art. I guess I just finish it up some. This work of art, spoke to a recent tradegy in our family well. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~sighs~*~... Sharon..this absolutely mesmerized my spirit and took my breath away. So very beautiful, embracing, and captivating. Standing ovations and loud cheers from Texas to you! Much love, Martha |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This brings about many thoughts to me and relates to soul seeking. I do hope you find what you are seeking as you ponder. One finds his life as he looses it. But looses it if he hangs on to it. Peace Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martha I am humbled, thank you. Koko: me too! Thank you. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ You are encircled by many spirits walking~ 'No sound of a word, but the spirit is heard' I do not need to tell you that this is beauty~ For your heart knows it is so~ Many peaceful thoughts float gently through this piece ... shared of a pure heart~ Love and hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mysteria, there is beauty and peace and strength in this message. Fabulously presented as you always do---but this poem is so beautifully spiritual I will keep this one close to my heart this day. Thank you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is supremely spiritual, I love it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon--Incredible writing and wonderful message and feeling in this lovely poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In velvet soft darkness embracing the land, In the quiet of the breath that she breathed, The sound of her laughter somehow I can hear, In the gentle breeze, through the budding trees. In the dark when the clouds come sliding by, Illuminated by the moon shining into the night. I swore I saw her spirit drifting happily by, In the glow of the palest moonlight. As I think about life, dying, and the cards, I wonder sometimes what life holds in store. And just as I felt anger creeping into my mind, A single owl’s feather softly landed onto my floor. ====================== Mysteria the imagery in this is divine, as is the message of intent... wonderful, empowerment writing very well done poetess of spirit Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When a single poem takes sadness and joy, giving up and going on, weakness and strength, fear and courage, death and life, mystery and understanding, the physical and the spiritual, and anger and acceptance... and weaves them into such a seamless whole, it's a poem for reading and re-reading and reading again. Beautiful! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge: I am indeed surrounded by many! I am truly blessed. You gave me peace. Serenity: Yes, this is quite spiritual and perhaps I posted it in the wrong place, but I am glad it is a "keeper". Thank you. Irish Rose: Again, yes quite spiritual, and as your Gramma used to say, Shalom! Martie: I am glad you enjoyed it, and felt it. Janet Marie: I love your comments they always put a grin on my face from ear to ear you know that? Thank you. Suthern: I did not realize I had taken all those factors of life and put into one poem but I guess I did as that is what a death does to you, it puts you in touch with all your senses if you let it do so. Thank you for reading this and your kind comments are so appreciated. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful, as usual. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The peace rests within the fallen feather, the soul continues through the trees, and of this voice we know of its continuance within our hearts. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Interloper: Thank you Julian: You speak wisely of the next journey and the peace that can be found within it, thank you, the feather now rests, and it is over. (hugs) |
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