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Open Poetry #13

The Circle of Souls

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-25 06:37 PM

Whats there in heaven
a love unspoken headed there
or just a bare soul
with no feelings at all
with no texture
no memories of the past

but what about the spirints in the earth
do they still feel their pain of death
or just the living pain we live in

what is a gost
a hunting nightmare?
or just a hopeless soul
and a helping hand if u may
need its help

but resurection is the end
we all end up the same way
back to the meat
the living the flesh
to feel the pain of grandmas beats
to suffer and suffer
till good decides its time for our brake
and take us once again

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

1 posted 2001-04-25 07:09 PM

"Or just a hopeless soul"
This is just wonderful. I love the allusions to death and heaven and everything in between. Keep writing, you are wonderful.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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