Open Poetry #13 |
My Lips Wanted More (a sensual one) |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
My Lips Wanted More by Michael We kissed and how my lips so wanted more. Her warmth begged as our bodies cried in hunger to be fed. With fingers, I combed her flowing auburn hair. I pulled her close and could feel each rise and fall of breast, each supple curve within my hands. I kissed her eyes and then the tip of her small nose. I sought her lips and greedily tasted them, our breaths hot in anticipation. She softly sighed as I reached for the lamp and turned the room to darkness. Proust- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And then ... and then? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Makes me want to call my girlfriend...James |
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Sami Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 49Ontario, Canada |
breathtaking!!!!! i wanna know what happens next!!! lol ~Sami~ 'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--yup, you're right...this is a sensual one...it is full of sighs. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely love poem. Joyce |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
Michael, your poem is beautiful and I can't seem to get rid of the smile I have upon reading the response our friend Interloper has said... Exquisite writing from your everflowing pen... Hugs2uPoetFriend ~coco~ |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
This makes my wish that my husband were home!!! |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Michael, This is so lovely, dear. Hugs to you, my friend. Elizabeth Anne |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Very sweet Michael, leaving the reader to anticipate what happens next.....I loved it. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Interloper, (smiling) I'd better not say... maybe I will in a sequel. Thanks. James, I'm sure she's appreciate the call and the attention. Thank you. Sami, Thanks for the "breathtaking" and for reading. Martie, Okay, it's your turn to write one like this. Thanks, my freind Joyce, I'm glad you liked this. Thank you Coco, Thanks for the "exquisite" and for reading. Ask Interloper what comes next. :-) Blaec, I'm sure your husband is wishing the same. Thank you Elizabeth Anne, Thank you, my friend. Hugs to you also. Sue, I'm happy you had the chance to read this. I know your time is valuable and you don't often make it to Passions. Thank you, my friend Proust- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
We kissed and how my lips so wanted more. pefection in writing and in anticipating and....and..and my lips always want more..so much more.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Michael!!! This is so beautifully erotic, an awesome write, I love it Take care, Melissa~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i loved this. and i know how this feels. for i have been here before. she even had auburn hair which i love to this day. beautiful peice. Jesse All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Wynter, And so do my own. Thank you Melissa, Thanks for the "awesome" and for "loving" this. Mostly, however, just thank you for taking the time to read this. Jesse, Yes, isn't it such a lovely color? Thank you. Proust- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michael is this my challenge? If it is I'm worried! Loved it, love you. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sigh |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
boy, reading is something I'll never give up...wow!!! Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I was hanging on the edge of my seat.....and fell off!!!! LOL WHEW!!! good grief......I can't breathe This is going into my library...hope the others don't burn up did I say I loved this?!?! |
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