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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-25 03:58 PM


My God is a loving God
Not one of vengeance or wrath
But one who comes with arms open
And warms the heart with a loving laugh

My God helps me in so many ways
When things go wrong, I don’t question why
I just give in to faith ever renewing
And hold my hands up to the blessed sky

It may be blasphemy today
It may be wrong to say
It may be why I feel this way

My God is a loving God
Not one to cruelly destroy
But breathes life into me
When life is fully enjoyed

My God is the creator of me
And all that I am
A never ending story
To be read over and over again

It may be blasphemy today
My body offered up this way
Before my God I pray


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-04-25 05:01 PM


My God is a loving God
Not one of vengeance or wrath
But one who comes with arms open
And warms the heart with a loving laugh

My God helps me in so many ways
When things go wrong, I don’t question why
I just give in to faith ever renewing
And hold my hands up to the blessed sky
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But breathes life into me
When life is fully enjoyed
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A never ending story
To be read over and over again

It may be blasphemy today
My body offered up this way
Before my God I pray
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and your God makes for a darn cool muse too *L*
love the message in this... and the empowerment..
I especially enjoyed the cadence..
and the imagery in that last verse aint half bad either *L*  

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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2 posted 2001-04-25 05:21 PM


Amen.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-25 05:21 PM


I like this. I'm partial to any poem of faith cause its rare. great job on this one!
Secret Whisper
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4 posted 2001-04-25 07:50 PM


AS a poet: I find this a lovely piece of work and is very creatively and wonderfully presented. You clearly are a talented writer.

As a Christian: God is a wrathful but merciful God. I feel that your classification of him as only a loving God is what is wrong with the world. We have lost our fear.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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5 posted 2001-04-25 11:03 PM


Interesting that I had a conversation not too long ago about the Old and New Testament....

He was so angered at us all for so long...

and then He gave His only Son...

what greater Love?

Amuse_mi
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6 posted 2001-04-25 11:07 PM



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7 posted 2001-04-26 01:55 AM


Yes, indeed .  Your God is a loving God.  May you always know that.  Joyce
KokoStewartKoomoa
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8 posted 2001-04-26 02:38 AM


Excellent...and He is pleased with this one. ...This inspiring poem gets a big Bravo for your profession of faith. Never let it go! It is contagious ya know...aloha

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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walker
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9 posted 2001-04-26 09:12 PM


God is an awesome God, that we cannot doubt!
Great expression of faith!

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