Open Poetry #13 |
My God is a Loving God |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
My God is a loving God Not one of vengeance or wrath But one who comes with arms open And warms the heart with a loving laugh My God helps me in so many ways When things go wrong, I don’t question why I just give in to faith ever renewing And hold my hands up to the blessed sky It may be blasphemy today It may be wrong to say It may be why I feel this way My God is a loving God Not one to cruelly destroy But breathes life into me When life is fully enjoyed My God is the creator of me And all that I am A never ending story To be read over and over again It may be blasphemy today My body offered up this way Before my God I pray |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My God is a loving God Not one of vengeance or wrath But one who comes with arms open And warms the heart with a loving laugh My God helps me in so many ways When things go wrong, I don’t question why I just give in to faith ever renewing And hold my hands up to the blessed sky ========================= But breathes life into me When life is fully enjoyed ========================= A never ending story To be read over and over again It may be blasphemy today My body offered up this way Before my God I pray ====================== and your God makes for a darn cool muse too *L* love the message in this... and the empowerment.. I especially enjoyed the cadence.. and the imagery in that last verse aint half bad either *L* Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this. I'm partial to any poem of faith cause its rare. great job on this one! |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
AS a poet: I find this a lovely piece of work and is very creatively and wonderfully presented. You clearly are a talented writer. As a Christian: God is a wrathful but merciful God. I feel that your classification of him as only a loving God is what is wrong with the world. We have lost our fear. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting that I had a conversation not too long ago about the Old and New Testament.... He was so angered at us all for so long... and then He gave His only Son... what greater Love? |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, indeed . Your God is a loving God. May you always know that. Joyce |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Excellent...and He is pleased with this one. ...This inspiring poem gets a big Bravo for your profession of faith. Never let it go! It is contagious ya know...aloha Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
God is an awesome God, that we cannot doubt! Great expression of faith! |
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