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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-25 02:45 PM


the mask of people's fears
is so strong and clear
u are shy u wear the strenght
but its obious in the mind
u scared u wear the courage
but u know u might sleep out
sencitive hearts
u wear the cold heart
but the feeling is much stroger than mask
u are weak u wear the confidence
but confidence is worn when u face the truth
when u are hurt
u try to wear all kind of masks
but the fear the weaknes and sadness of ur heart
will always remind u
tha pain thas deep in ur heart
has surfaced the true mask
if with them u can't still
acomplish ur tasks
so be ur self
and u might be the one
u want to be

love hurts but dont hide the pain
cause deep inside it remains the same


© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-04-26 04:21 PM


I have to tell you that I really, really like this poem....it is penned in a free flowing style that I enjoy, and what was exceptional were the ending thoughts of just being yourself, without the masks!!    Excellent, my friend, and I am hoping to come across more from you!!!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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