Open Poetry #13 |
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The Masks Of Peoples Fears |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
the mask of people's fears is so strong and clear u are shy u wear the strenght but its obious in the mind u scared u wear the courage but u know u might sleep out sencitive hearts u wear the cold heart but the feeling is much stroger than mask u are weak u wear the confidence but confidence is worn when u face the truth when u are hurt u try to wear all kind of masks but the fear the weaknes and sadness of ur heart will always remind u tha pain thas deep in ur heart has surfaced the true mask if with them u can't still acomplish ur tasks so be ur self and u might be the one u want to be love hurts but dont hide the pain cause deep inside it remains the same |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have to tell you that I really, really like this poem....it is penned in a free flowing style that I enjoy, and what was exceptional were the ending thoughts of just being yourself, without the masks!! Excellent, my friend, and I am hoping to come across more from you!!!!! ![]() Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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