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tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

0 posted 2001-03-26 08:50 PM

only for you
the negligee of dreams
falls open at a touch
welcomes you in
where wishes await
the gentle caress
of curious fingers
curving to skin

only for you
silk desires slip
soundless, from shoulders
revealing all passion
and naked, i wait
for you to know me
wearing only a smile
and loving the fashion

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-26 08:52 PM

this is not what I needed tonight tradewind!!!

but I still like it!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

2 posted 2001-03-26 09:07 PM

hahaha!! sorry, but thanks Sven!

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-03-26 09:07 PM

and naked, i wait
for you to know me
wearing only a smile

All that money spent at Victoria Secrets just to end up in a nice little pile on the floor.

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-03-26 09:21 PM

A smile is a lovely fashion that will never go out of style.
Very nice poem.

Mike

tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

5 posted 2001-03-26 11:07 PM

inot2B and Packratmike, thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed.

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

6 posted 2001-03-26 11:41 PM

Tradewind, This is terrific and I loved the title which was so right for this piece. Panne

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-03-27 12:17 PM

I enjoyed this immensely. I'm still chuckling.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2001-03-27 12:22 PM

Very seductive! Fun to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

9 posted 2001-03-27 01:00 AM

Panne, Julian and Trillium, thank you for taking time to comment. glad you enjoyed the read.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-03-27 07:56 PM

Very clever with a creative twist of words, excellent...

Take care,
Melissa~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-08-14 12:39 PM

Sensual...James

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