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The candle
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The candle |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The candle burns evenly, drops of wax pours down, like snow on a volcano. I watch the candle, as I pray. Its flicker reminds me, that it will one day end. And just like the candle, I now shine bright. For my youth I'm thankful. For my life I'm grateful. And when my time comes, I hope that it ends, just like this candle's. Complete and in peace. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walker~ Indeed, indeed ! There are spirits walking the forum tonight. Wonderfully done ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
You've taken a candle and written an incredibly, spiritual poem. I hope you are also grateful for your talent...I am. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Walker, This is absolutely lovely. What a gift for poetry that you have. Thank you for sharing.  Michael Proust- |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
completely peaceful |
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