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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-24 04:00 PM

Farewell
Source of my light.
I will miss your warmth
And illumination.
It was nice
To bask in your glow,
Even for a short time,
Dreaming again,
Feeling again,
Hoping again.
It was nice
To be alive once again,
Challenged once again,
Appreciated a little.
Darkness reigns.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-24 04:02 PM

Ah.. Perhaps you now have a lignt of your own to share. Joyce

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-04-24 04:04 PM

Ouch.........You write this loss very well. I compliment you. Emotion flows.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-04-24 06:36 PM

May Darkness's rule be short. I love this, and I've read more of your work than commented on..just never knew what to say.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-24 10:25 PM

Very moving write. I feel the page aching.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-04-24 10:28 PM

And in the darkness may your own light shine Interloper.....poignant writing, well done.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

6 posted 2001-04-25 11:26 AM

Not your normal, upbeat self.

Coco
Junior Member

since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

7 posted 2001-04-25 12:39 PM

Interloper, your poem is truly terrific but I'm sure you already knew that I'd be drawn into this one sweetie...

In the darkness one may learn
To face the fears and cry tears alone
And through this journey time shall heal
As in the end new beginnings reveal
Strength and love of family and friend
Help tumble down the walls of defence
Now set free to soar in gentle winds
Nevermore in the midst of dark shadow again...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
~coco~

[This message has been edited by Coco (edited 04-25-2001).]

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-04-25 01:11 PM

very well written..i can relate completely..
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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