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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-04-24 10:16 AM




Apnay seenay maen jo piyar k diyey jalla rukhay hean
(The earthen lamps that you have lighted in your bosom 'chest')
Aansoo a gum say inhaen bujja aao kissi din
(Extinguish them by your tears of sorrows and come anyone day)

Apni aankhonn maen jo piyar ka darya samaey howay ho
(The river of love that you have absorbed in your eyes)
Uss darya ko kissi samundar maen baha aao kissi din
(Flow that river to any sea and come anyone day)

Wo dil jo maray piyar maen dewanna howa hay
(That heart which is mad in my love)
Uss dilay bayqarar ko sumjao kissi din
(Convince 'advise' to that anxious 'restless' heart to anyone day)

Apni aankhonn maen jo piyar k supnay sajaey howay ho
(The dreams of love that you have decorated in your eyes)
Inhean khushboo ki turah fiza maen bikhaer aao kissi din
(Spread them as a smell in the atmosphere and come anyone day)

Uss Shahuss ki battonn maen khabi na aana Wasi
(Naver come to be taken in of that person Wasi)
Bhoel kar bi ussay bhoel jao kissi din
(After forgetting her, Forget .... anyone day)      


                    ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2001-04-24 09:55 PM


A very interesting form!  i found myself studying it quite closely.  i enjoyed this. a  wonderful write!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-04-25 12:47 PM


A little hard to follow but I think I get the essence of it.  I enjoy the way you are growing in this language.
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-26 03:06 PM


Good in any language my friend.  Write on.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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