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Open Poetry #13

Minds Eye

PeterPeter
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 30
British, London

0 posted 2001-04-24 08:23 AM

I give you everything
try to stay alive.. in your mind
Try to figure out why it doesn't work
Try to sleep this off

I give you absolutely nothing
And you thank me
For everything.
....the past distracts me....
you smile and love me....in your mind.
just so I can't see.

I need to sleep.
I can't eat.
want to go walk away...in your mind..
But you keep me off my feet.

I feel like dying and living in heaven
Did I?
Or if I did would you too?
talk to me....

you mean to say I'm the closest one?
It was never your idea of what's painful fun
It's been you who has been there.
was it you who was always so scared?
you are afraid... in your mind...
of this love you thought you'd never see.
Cry to me..
you mean to tell me you're the only one for me

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-24 02:28 PM

hummm....past distractions....look forward! Enjoyed!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-04-24 03:04 PM

Tumultuous! Very interesting tangle.

Krawdad
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Martinque
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 69

3 posted 2001-04-24 08:04 PM

Welcome to Passions! I'll look for more of your work.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-24 08:17 PM

Ah, the tangle webs we weave when ourselves we wish to deceive. Look forward: love well.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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