Open Poetry #13 |
Two Hearts |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I lay in the darkness last night and I listened to you breathe, I felt a steady beating heart of the man in whom I believe. I laid there in the silence closing my eyes I could see, the love there in your eyes the certain way you look at me. Before drifting off to dream I gently gave a kiss or two I softly whispered in your ear good night dear, I love you. And somewhere in the darkness the silence heard us breathe, and two hearts beat as one~ in this love they do believe. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very sweet. A comforting love. Joyce |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
There is such a comfort in love when it is good. You've written that well. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very sweet... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's wonderful to feel this way.....this is lovely. [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i dream to have such kisses again |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Gentle Spirit-This was a very tender and touching piece from your heart, nicely done. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A comfortable goodnight that we can all believe it. Kraw' |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very comforting Joyce, thanks On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I write as I feel Tessa, thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks for leaving your thoughts Sea. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It truly is wonderful is it not Rose!! Thanks hon. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill, heres a wish from me to you, may all of your dreams always come true............ Hugs dear poet friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words Gemini......*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Krawdad, it is indeed a very comfortable place to be.......thanks alot. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wonderful words my friend...nice feeling, huh. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautifully romantic, GS. All writing comes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Love is always a nice feeling JW. It's also a nice feeling to have friends read, thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Lone Wolf, it is the romance that makes this love so special. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is gently romantic. Such a pretty read. Thank you, Gentle Spirit. Michael Proust- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well Michael, I guess I am just a romantic at heart.....thank you for stopping and leaving such thoughtful words. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You knew I would like this one *w* It shows your heart. *s* [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey you.....thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so very beautiful and obviously written by a loving soul....Thank you....Sue. Suetang |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The loving soul comes from the love that is given to me ten fold Sue. My writing is easiest when I can write what I feel in my heart.......thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Very breathtaking and gentle. I am enjoying reading here. *s* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you and I hope you enjoy it here. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I believe, too. Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So glad that you believe. Thanks. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful and romantic write, GS...definitely fits my mood lately, too! Love it! sp to be with you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am glad that you have the mood of love Snowpants, I can't think of a better mood to be in!! Thanks so much for stopping by. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, GS! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suthern, thank you so much for that. Thank you all for leaving such kind thoughts and for taking the time to read this. I indeed wrote it for the one who is special in my life. He has a special way of touching my life, and I only wanted in someway to show him how much he means to me. Thanks to all and a big hug to you all. Peace Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This was so lovely, I just am learning about this library thing. I hope you don't mind my answering to this again so I can put it there. Thank you. It truly is a beautiful reading. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very much the way it should be...and is...for you! Brava! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigheyes, a poem, twice read is always a compliment to any poet. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, your words touch me deeply. This is the way it should always be in love...I am grateful that it has come to me now. Hugs sweet one!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
To everyone, you have touched my heart deeply with your responses to this poem. I can never thank you all enough for your kind words and sentiments. Hugs to all and Bless you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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