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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-23 02:51 PM

~This Very Precious Love~

Rivers of fantasy crest on the edge of belief
as dreams weave portraits with much emotion
like the silent dance of breath in the wind
my soul dips once more where the water runs deep
no longer fearing what makes one weak
my heart soaks like a sponge
standing with open arms feeling fire in my bones
the winds of promise refine love pure as gold
I’m halfway to heaven with this very precious love

BloomingRose

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-04-23 03:18 PM

BloomingRose~
My goodness .. this is just absolutely gorgeous.

What a beautifully written piece of love !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-23 03:47 PM

I've been halfway to heaven also...I want to go all the way...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-23 03:56 PM

Beautiful!!! Joyce

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-23 07:21 PM

never stop rising. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2001-04-23 09:19 PM

Marge~ Thanks my sweet friend *hugs*

James~ Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the read

Joyce~ As always, thank you much

Sven~ Thanks

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-04-23 10:54 PM

like the silent dance of breath in the wind
my soul dips once more where the water runs deep
no longer fearing what makes one weak
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Deb this is wonderful imagery, laced thru a lovely, sincere declaration of faith and devotion.
beautiful and inspiring...
love the "halfway to Heaven" line
very well done poetess

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

Coco
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since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

7 posted 2001-04-28 02:01 AM

BloomingRose, I very much enjoyed reading your beautiful poem...

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

8 posted 2001-04-28 02:19 AM

Very uplifting and ponders on ones faith.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2001-04-28 07:13 AM

Jm~ Thank you so much.

Coco~ I am glad you liked this. I hope you too feel a bit inspired.

Latin P~ I thank you for your insight as to where the inspiration came from. It borders on faith and love.

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

10 posted 2001-04-28 10:54 AM

THAT WAS PRETTY. I LIKE IT.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

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