Open Poetry #13 |
Saving Grace |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Saving Grace tonight God -- let me die and to an angel's wings I fly when do the weary rest when do we pass this test will my heart ever learn maybe with MY sins, I'll burn maybe there is NO saving grace not in ......................this place can You grant me these things let me rest in angel's wings ******with a SPECIAL thanks to Marge & Nan for your help with putting the graphic on***** helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful graphic to illustrate, Helen! And yes, I'm kinda tired too right now. Nice job on this. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Lovely graphics and superb poetry. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Your peace can be found If you put on wings of sound Let the friends you hold dear Lend your heart an open ear |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I envy you poets with your graphics. I am so new with this computer, I am lucky to even find my way to this site. But this was lovely. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ Your thoughts are intriguing - if a little sad ~ The graphic is stunning - and adds to the drama of the piece ~ It is a completely dynamic presentation ~ Glad to assist. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the sad beauty of this is wonderful. . . well done helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Even weary written beautifully. Hope you soon get a reprieve. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, . . . nicely done . . . wishing you peace . . . e |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Welldone ......A great job I love to nice poetry. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Welldone ......A great job I love to nice poetry. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know how she feels....this is amazing. |
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