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Buffet of Lampoon
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Buffet of Lampoon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Buffet of Lampoon Love has pressed around like trees Dripping dress of filigrees. Smothering my little glen My freedom of where and when Larks have flown above rosewood Dropping petals where I stood. Filling thoughts with misty mist Tweaking me a little twist. My mind has gone pleasures preen Gone within the phantom scene And I am lost to all but love Holding me in velvet glove. Oh Princess of my lovers wile Come join me on the river Nile. Descend from heaven come and sit. Before I die and lose my wit. I sail in sorrow cannot steer For you are there and I am here. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Filling thoughts with misty mist Tweaking me a little twist. beautiful, witty and quite charming *s Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Edgy wit, charmingly written and so much a voice to be spoken. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you my nakd love Is not wit a velvet glove? Julian, Charming but not alarming. Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Larks have flown above rosewood Dropping petals where I stood. Filling thoughts with misty mist Tweaking me a little twist. My mind has gone pleasures preen Gone within the phantom scene And I am lost to all but love Holding me in velvet glove. Oh Princess of my lovers wile Come join me on the river Nile. Descend from heaven come and sit. Before I die and lose my wit. I sail in sorrow cannot steer For you are there and I am here. ======================= then ya need to fly Randy to where she is  ahh the imagery in this is divine.... as is the cadence and rhyme ... and I do so love walking thru the Shangri-la that is your mind. very cool write Stinky... thank you for taking us on a sail upon your sea *ww*  meI love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Love taking you for a sail. Randy just put on a double saddle. He said why sail when you can fly. WW S |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I loved your rhyme and your story. Joyce |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Joyce. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent work, Seymour... the last two lines are wonderfully poignant! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thanks for the excellent and poignant. *L* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
in sigh's emprise I am apprised of where be but his glen that I may find the when... |
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