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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-23 04:04 AM

each moment amplified in sigh
each whim a spark in flame's desire
Everything I ever was
awaits awakening of touch.
Each word you speak
a promise--preached
what ye sow
is what ye reap--
a spark of
evolution's leap
my hunger--
lumber to the fire.

"Wake me..."
in the shivered voice...
"Take me..."
I give you the choice.
"Forsaken."
freedom's death, rejoiced
just as bondage, can be free.

Whisper.
Waken.
Take me.
Please?

A kiss
partaken
dream
sweet dreams...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-04-23 04:13 AM

Well this is certainly a sensuous little gem Celeste! I'm not sure of some things in there but I am sure of the "take me" part. You know the simple biological function that drives all of us. Great write my passionate poet pal you're the lady of the pen!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-23 01:13 PM

burning with the flame of life. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-23 01:55 PM

aThese words smoke and smoulder with promised passion.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-04-23 09:43 PM

each moment amplified in sigh
each whim a spark in flame's desire
Everything I ever was
awaits awakening of touch.
Each word you speak
a promise--preached
what ye sow
is what ye reap--
a spark of
evolution's leap
my hunger--
lumber to the fire.
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moth mirrors me twin....
and ya know we need those mirrors to put on our singe proof mascara

me

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2001-04-25 01:35 AM

in embers' soft red glow . . . the heat!

lyw k/s

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