Open Poetry #13 |
Prayer Dedication |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
On this day to God above Of whom we know and cherish We send our thoughts of hope and love In faith we shall not perish If we live a life so long And do not waste one minute Lift our hearts in word and song And accept our Savior in it If our lives should be cut short If that is what our God hath willed Let it be upon report Our lives were Jesus filled This day we supped upon our meal Drug from shield and iron plate To those in need we ask You heal For Your compass we know is great You keep us close and when we fall Your eye upon the staggered sheep The Lamb who died for one and all Has cause to watch and weep We love you God, Your mercy awed We cannot fathom Your design This Your image although we're flawed Through each flicker the Light will shine In Jesus Christ the Lord, He lives! When exulting, we can say then Oh, praise the mighty Lord forgives In Jesus Christ name, Amen. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I will admit a time or two I've read your poems and didn't know what to say. (I wasn't sure what it was all about) This time I have no trouble for your poem is filled with love for the ONE above. Walt this humbles me. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is truly wonderful! God has reason for everything, and He is in complete control of things. Love the spiritual side of you Walt. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is wonderful, Walt! I wish I had written it. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God bless your heart for giving us something so beautiful as this! Kathleen Blake |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Walter, I never thought you had a prayer but i do like this. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you Walt, for sharing such a beautiful from the heart prayer. Your words can come from me or any other. I plan to print this and frame it where I can pray it often. Thanks again, ME |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walty a beautiful prayer you have penned, my friend. Thanks for sharing. Maree |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt, I'm printing and keeping........ SEA |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
really beautiful, the thoughts, the composition, and the effect the reading has on ones heart...thank you walt |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very wonderful, walt .. pure from the heart stuff here.. i hope many more will stop in to read.. hugs, g |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem, Walt...brilliant writing...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sorry for the late reply, my friend, but I'm so glad I found it. Nicely said, dear Walt. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading your prayer Walt...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your writing has grown by leaps and bounds Walty - it's great to watch the progression of style and things.. This is exquisite... Square: K |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm so glad I came across this...fine work and words that lend healing to a troubled heart, promise peace when none can be found. I thank you. Michael Proust- |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
all of yuh been so nice and i aint even said thankyuh |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
came back for another prayer......... |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
This is very well written. 'Flows quite nicely. I like all of the "ifs" 'cause we can be taken away from this earth so fast. I also like the line about God's Compass being great...awesome thought. Just a small reminder...tell Him thank you for the awesome talent he has given you Walt. You've truly got it and have been blessed! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
our God is awesome, and so is this prayer. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i wanted to thank yuh all for takin the time out to read this o yuh |
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