»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #13
»
Seeing not the Tear
| Open Poetry #13 |
|
Seeing not the Tear |
|
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
|
Seeing not the Tear Walking in the rain they do not see his tear washed in the sky shower flowing free Feeling his consciousness the gift is given splashed into the glistening film to join the rest past the warty toad awake from winter’s cold beside the tulip’s blade so far from home through the new green grass fixing time away under canopied elms adding one more year past the bare apple tree venerably gnarling its trunk by the old purple lilac trying to bloom again hearing the kinglets frail song bearing north and home they will not know he’s there seeing not the tear soon gone to the deep and to the vapor and the young grey kitten huddled from so many tears wonders as he passes can he really be trusted? washed in the sky shower flowing free Krawdad 4.23.01 |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved | |||
Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very good imagery! Nice piece! |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful description of the tears that maintain the pulse of life. Well done! |
||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Brad, Ethome, Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed! Krawdad |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
