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Doug Pretorius
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-22 11:19 PM

Endless Love
April 22, 2001
Copyright 2001 Doug Pretorius

She opens her heart once more
he walks in through the broken glass
and gently opens the charred door
Her hinges creak, painfully resisting
'Not again' her soul cries
but her heart yearns and insists
His soothing gaze calms her deep within
allaying long held fears and sins
Her white knuckles rest away from harm
as she lets herself fall into his arms
Another journey through heart and mind
as he holds her hand in his
rightly guiding her through kindness
Her eyes close at long last
as her trust deepens and grows
there will be no fall where shadows are cast
Even should she stumble or slide
his reassuring strength will lift her again
back to her feet at his side
Her passion returns as she looks into his eyes
there's no questioning this love
for it goes on endlessly with no need to hide
Finally the kiss comes, the perfect embrace
the night slips gently into this magical place
Their bodies entangle in intricate patterns
of light and love
They know at morning's rise that all the nights
and all the days will never be enough

Amuse_mi
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since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

1 posted 2001-04-22 11:29 PM

Wow! This is GRRRRREAT! (Sorry Tony {as in tiger})
I adore this piece.

Thank you for sharing it!

A .M.

[This message has been edited by Amuse_mi (edited 04-22-2001).]

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-22 11:30 PM

This is very nice. Joyce

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:39 PM

really nice done man ...........i can relate

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-04-23 09:35 PM

Beautiful!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-04-25 03:49 PM

Excellent! *S* This is beautiful.

Kay
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

6 posted 2001-04-25 07:42 PM

I was lost in this one

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

7 posted 2001-04-25 07:52 PM

Love is such an amazing ... and terrifying thing. I think you did a wonderful job at represtenting not only the wonders but also a few of the pains that come with love. Great writing.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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