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This Dance
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This Dance |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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This Dance If I closed my eyes to listen would I hear his footsteps near? If I lit the scented candles that surrounded, filled the air Would he come and join me in the warmth and float the sea with me? If I closed my eyes and dreamed of him through steam, would this I see? With opened eyes, would he be there to bathe me in his touch? Would he kiss me with his look of love in places treasured much? Would he whisper in the rising heat and ride the waves of foam? And when the feel has crested would his touch, my body, roam? If I closed my eyes, then opened them within a moments glance, Would you join me in my sea of warmth? Would you, enjoy this dance? ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - YES, YES, YES, UNEQUIVACABLITTERY ABSOLUTELY, YES! bc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Maureen! Lovely! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You can always make me smile...you .... huggzzzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Denise..you slipped in between Bill and my response *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great write, Wynter! (but I hope he deserves you!) I enjoyed this! sp  to be with you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Snowpants...I don't know what I am deserving of...but it's a dance I think of often  thank you~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sensual and beautiful! (good luck... hope the answer is YES! *S*) |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Wynter, Yes, I do believe he would. Hey, this is pretty.  Michael Proust- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This as Michael says is a very pretty poem. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Such a marvelously seductive piece this is. Wonderful .... ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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