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Sami
Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-21 10:05 PM


i gave up today.
i gave up who i really am
for someone everyone thinks
i should be.
i shouldnt fall so quickly
for those inviting glances
and smiles.
i shouldnt leap at the chance
to be alone with prying hands
and kisses.
i should wait for the one
with a caring heart
and soul.
i should only love the one
with comforting arms
and words.
i should love you.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

© Copyright 2001 Samantha Masales - All Rights Reserved
juanrodriguez
Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada
1 posted 2001-04-21 10:07 PM


thas good but why are u saying u should give up baby ........ but  always keep ur principals too


Tessa
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67
Ohio
2 posted 2001-04-21 11:07 PM


You write very well, Sami.  I think we all sometimes do this, with much regret.  I admire your realizing it.  Sometimes we never do.
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