Too Much Thought (is it the music?)

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-04-21 03:28 PM

The music thrills and feeds me,
Send me drowning,
Please release me.
Song by song remembers,
Moments lost and gained,
Alike are flames and embers.
Sun soaked and dancing,
Whirling wrought,
With self finding.
Word on word and note smolder,
Whirling body,
Grows free and bolder.

Perhaps the music makes me weak,
For dream soaked twisted nights,
Perhaps its because of this I loose my sleep.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-21 05:34 PM

                   "Song by song remembers,
                    Moments lost and gained,"

amazing what the music can do........this is great!

SEA

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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-21 05:41 PM

It is so nice to remember "young"....

and such a treat to read this!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-21 06:00 PM

cool!!! music is all sometimes... it's peace, it's longing, it's love... it's everything... to me

enjoyed the write...

whatchya listening to?

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-21 06:57 PM

music always makes me weak. . . so does good poetry. . . like this. . .

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-04-23 02:23 AM

I like this! Makes the heart happy.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-04-23 02:56 AM

"For dream soaked twisted nights, "

Well I find that line very interesting....write on dear girl you're not inhibited you're just not doing everything you want! Very nice! Must be another light sleeper.

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spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

7 posted 2001-04-23 03:46 AM

You be awesome woman! yes! Music and poetry...This was terrific as were all the other poetic surmisings of Thought. Bravo!

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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

8 posted 2001-04-23 04:04 AM

Perhaps the music makes me weak,
For dream soaked twisted nights,
Perhaps its because of this I loose my sleep.

I too loose my sleeps often after listening romantic music.

I love to nice poetry.

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