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Well Aflame
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Well Aflame |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well Aflame Virginia Salter The day is burning it’s well aflame my excuse to stay is getting lame. Toil calls success can come to tarry more is surely dumb. Yet playing here taking time for you is something I’m so prone to do. This guilt I feel is closing in so much awaits to stay is sin. So weak am I in lingered want you words do vie cajole and haunt. How might I break away my friend how might I find a time to end? How might I go to do great deeds tear me away from glorious seeds? ©April 21, '01 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So weak am I in lingered want you words do vie cajole and haunt. How might I break away my friend how might I find a time to end? How might I go to do great deeds tear me away from glorious seeds? ======================= my oh my... talk about poetic mirrors... I have been trying to tear myself from the flame for over a year now.... Virginia this is a very cool poem, I love the premise of it and the way you used the anology of the flame. well done poetess... very!! I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This writing reflects some very developed skill and thought that leaves me perplexed and in total wonder. Congratulations on being who you are. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...I love this...and as Jan said...Mirrors indeed...I enjoyed this much! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thank you all for reading, I was pretty sure there would be several here that could relate to this conundrum at least I've sandwiched in more than an hour of yard work, weed pulling, this morning and cleaning up the kitchen |
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