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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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one hand in timid reach/retreat one tongue in mute of all entreat one touch enough to pledge a vow one silence speaking volumes---LOUD. two eyes in timid reach/retreat two hands entwined, fingers complete two tongues in language without speak two--as one-- creation's peak. Three? Is but result of "WE"- an ocean born of river... Four a mystery longs for more- a desert's night in shiver. Add them and then count again. The elements add up to ten. After nine? Time after time, with ten we must begin again. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Gosh if i add all the number up in your write i come up with 48, but i noticed that the math your doing in not that simple...... LIFE as each of us know it. Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh bernie, love, it's not that complicated...1+2+3+4=10----it's a numerology thing! No adding machine necessary!  Thanks for popping in...sorry you too are insomnia bound t'nite! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
oh i got that math you were doing, was just pulling your chain.... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
one hand in timid reach/retreat one tongue in mute of all entreat one touch enough to pledge a vow one silence speaking volumes---LOUD. two eyes in timid reach/retreat two hands entwined, fingers complete two tongues in language without speak two--as one-- creation's peak. Three? Is but result of "WE"- an ocean born of river... Four a mystery longs for more- a desert's night in shiver. ========================= (you put up a poem about math after the week me has had in tax hell???)  lolthis poem is so damn cool ... and proof that there is no simple math or simple rhymes baby.... rhyme divine ... dont for get those vials when ya mail me  *kisskiss*  meI love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
seems simple... it all adds up.... but it's very complicated sometimes, isn't it? this poem is sumthing wonderful, a total equation ....in addition, it says so much |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I skipped the math - I love the communication |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I was never that good at math. . . but I like this poem. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seren...probably one of your best....with or without the equations.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Hope 10 doesn't mean you're down-for-the-count !  LOL @ JanetMarie ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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