Some of ME (writing originals)

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Open Poetry #13

Some of ME (writing originals)

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2001-04-21 03:00 AM

Some of ME

Here thinking about not posting an original lately,
Noticing that I have replied greatly.

Not knowing if I found the poets key,
Ideas and thoughts, the sentences elude me.

With hidden messages wrote in between.
Words that are read upon the screen,

Only having meaning to the one who has wrote,
Trying to make sure that not one line is a quote.

So being original, not repeating a thing,
Making each line wrote their very own string.

With all that is written and copyrighted these days,
Rewriting all the lines in many different ways.

When finally posting there is no guarantee,
That the original I give you is some of me.
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Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

1 posted 2001-04-21 08:45 AM

How did you slip all the way down here?

You know, that is a very true thought, for all. I'm often afraid when a line comes to me that I might have read it somewhere.

Nice one, Bernie!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-21 04:49 PM

you
and
I
have
used
these
words
before
line
by
line,
score
by
store
until
we
see
others
who
have
used
them
once
more

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-04-21 05:24 PM

lol at sunshine
thank you Just A Women and sunshine for reading

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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