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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-20 11:50 PM


i have loved so much
but it seems i have lost the touch
dough it seems i found a reason to live
it feels full of sadness
so the memories bleed
and death is the only helping hand
i cant bare to be alone
but the memories we shared
are slowly gone
i cant bare captivity
but my heart is loked in cages
so full of naivity
my soul is called by god
so full of questions
what is my meaning ?
what is my destiny?
what is life at all with no one to love?
pain is an often feeling in me
love has gone low and weak
lonelyness... seems to be my bestes friend
as i think of u.........lonelyness..conforts me
as i dream of u sadness wakes me
as i stare at the distant stars
tears clear my scars of ur beauty
wish u was here with me
to meet miss loneliness
she'll tell u
with out u
my life will always be a mess




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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2001-04-21 01:11 AM


Juan, sorry your feeling so sad but here's a smile for you hope your day gets better and happiness is on your side.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-04-21 04:41 PM


Juan I too feel as if my life has no meaning when I invest my feelings in love and find failure is my reward...James
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3 posted 2001-04-21 07:06 PM


there's just enough edge to this to show the heart that lies underneath a tough exterior. . .

really good. . .

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