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Open Poetry #13

Eternity ... a tanka

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2001-04-20 11:17 PM

Eternity

Your eyes like emeralds
Your touch, light as a feather
Your voice so soothing.
Eternity would not be
Enough time to show you love.

TaraB
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 04-20-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-04-20 11:23 PM

ahhhha yes, beautifully said

SEA

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since 2001-03-10

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2 posted 2001-04-21 08:59 AM

Beautiful!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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3 posted 2001-04-21 07:50 PM

this is wonderful. . .

I love it. . .

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