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Sami
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-20 09:43 PM


i lay unable to sleep
so i count the imaginary
stars
on the dark ceiling.
i think of how
i am invisible to the world
all curled up in the darkness.
i am unimportant,
i am no one.
i am part of this dark,
part of this night.
then i suddenly feel
you stir beside me.
and i remember how
i am not no one,
i am someone,
to you.
i remember how
i am not part of this night,
i am part of your life.
i am not invisible
because you see me.
and all that matters
to me
is that you want to love me.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

© Copyright 2001 Samantha Masales - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-04-20 09:47 PM


Sami~ this is excellent!    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-21 04:54 AM


Sami,

You could never be invisible!

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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3 posted 2001-04-21 07:53 AM


Sometimes we do forget. But then that special someone reminds us of how loved/special we are by just being there.
A Whisper's Caress
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4 posted 2001-04-21 10:11 AM


so beautifully sad...filled with longing...

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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Pakistan
5 posted 2001-04-21 10:23 AM


Very nice ........Sami
Sami
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-04-21 10:57 AM


SEA~ thanks!!

Michael~ ahhh!! thank you! thats so sweet!  

Kitkat~ youre absolutely right....

Whisper & Waseem~ thank you very much  

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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