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5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49


0 posted 2001-04-20 11:46 AM


I will be leaving soon,
I will depart from everyone I love,
Maybe for months or longer,
But I am writting this to you now,
To let you know,
I will never forget you,
Nor I will ever think that you weren't good enough.


I need space to think,
To put things back in place,
I hope you understand,
I hope you will give me space,
For I am doing this for a good reason,
To keep me from breaking.


I love you all,
I promise you I will be back,
I dont know when
But when I do
We will have the best time of our lives
Maybe if not on earth,
Then in the place most high
And full of greatness
But Im promising you this
I will be back
And I will NEVER forget you.


Ok that was so stupid.. I cant believe I just wrote that,,,but I was bored.. and had nothing else to do.. I will fix it later or something


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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-04-20 11:49 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Where you going...you just got here!  From your last few lines, it seems like you have a tremendous sense of humor....

so play along with us, you'll like it fine!  And check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2001-04-20 11:53 AM


Welcome! I'd like to see what you write when serious!    Stay....have fun!    SEA
inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2001-04-20 11:58 AM


You did great. This place here will give you all the space you need to think.
Welcome to the family!
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-20 12:03 PM


welcome to our happy little community and NEVER apologize for your words., unless they hurt another
Sometimes, they are the last defense against death.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-20-2001).]

knightlyshadows
Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
5 posted 2001-04-20 12:22 PM


EDITH *cries* ur leavin me!!!!!!!!!!!
peeze peeze peeze hurry back to us.
its what 3 months? u best be gettin online while ur gone u dork butt!!!!!!!!!!
newayz wut u taklin bouts eh? i liked it muchs! heh *hugs* love u hunnay

tiff <~~ heh u cant have it lol

Godsend_1
Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247
great state of illinois
6 posted 2001-04-21 05:06 AM


edith i love you hun you have been a great friend to me you have no idea you have made me think that some ppl out there really do care about a fat man so thank you peek, i will miss you terribly peek more then i think you know or understand but well there you go i hope you do get online some peek and if i can call you give me your aunts number ok but if you need space away from fat man its ok i understand just promise to hurry back and not make me cry more then i already will, bye peek i love you ok so come back to me and remember your promise ok bye peek and be careful ok   bye *hugs* *doesnt want to let you go but he has to so he will just run and cry himself to sleep* bye peek

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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