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My river runs dry!
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My river runs dry! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Perched upon a seat of high hope I measure my barren heart's scope, Bound and tied by life's twisted rope I see gloom through my telescope! Sad music plays in forlorn tunes As my castle of dreams lay strewn, Shadows sway in mournful swoons While I hide in deserted dunes! Wolves dance under a moonless sky As my spirits break down and die, Eyes stare at unlit paths and cry While my river of love runs dry! Ghosts languish in my lost lagoon As my boat drowns in black monsoon! .!. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sudhir, may your poet's pen never run dry! I truly enjoyed this Kathleen Blake |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I don't believe your river of anything will ever truly run dry.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kathleen, Thank you for your wonderful sentiment. I am glad that you enjoyed... Elizabeth, I am warmed by such a thought.. Thanks, I needed that... have hit a very low level of morale these days... thanks again, for the boost... Regards, Sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--This is so telling of the mood...the imagery so sad and dark...but, I'm still glad to see you...here is a hug and smile to cheer you up....  ((((((((hug))))))))) |
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duke Junior Member
since 2001-03-26
Posts 12 |
Dark Imagery I read it out loud the second time This Was Good |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed my friend. . . you shall never run dry. . . Superb writing. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sudhir, it is so good to see your work here again. I enjoyed the dark quality to this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, The night will pass and the sun will shine again. Strong feelings good write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh and not so long ago you were very happy - I hope the rains come soon, and are filled with splinters of shimmering rainbows.... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
life's twisted rope ~ just one of many stirring phrases. You have expressed a consuming sorrow quite vividly, Sudhir, and in its poetic naming, perhaps a bit of strength to you? Many kind thoughts your way, friend. It is so good to read you again. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What wonderful images you use to portray your feelings! I felt the despair in that black monsoon, but remember monsoons are only for a season. I wish you a rapid return to that seat of high hope. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Martie, Thanks for the hug, my friend... it does go a long way to help... duke, firstly let me welcome you to the world of Passions... please enjoy your stay here... and thanks for dropping by O Sir Sven, Thanks so much... means a lot! Dee, it feels good to be back with people who recognise... thank you... Seymour, my friend, I do hope so, I do... Thanks a lot... Karilea, how ironic, is it not, my friend... well, let's see what else is on offer in this cinema of life... thank you so much for your offering of hope... Claire, Thanks so much for coming by and for your kind thoughts... kcs (Marilyn), thank you very much...for your wish too... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well done my firend! I have missed your pen... our river was a bit lower without you as well... Jamie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Jamie, and I have missed your magic too... regards, sudhir |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent writing!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, suthern for coming by and your 'excellent' remarks too... regards, sudhir |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
very good writing...I like this! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sudhir when you reach you darkest hour remember that just because life doesn't go exactly the way you desire or expect it to that doesn't mean that it will not ultimately go in your favor...as long as you are learning lessons and doing whats right happiness will eventually come to you...I believe this totally...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ May you be lifted to shining ... Thanks for sharing YOU with us.  Be well, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nathan, Thanks for coming by... James, I would like to believe what you believe too, but my friend, the going is quite difficult to perceive the thoughts. I guess I have to force myself to hoping for the best... If I push myself hard towards it, maybe one day the sun will shine... thanks, my friend Marge, Thank you so much, my friend for your words of hope... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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