Open Poetry #13 |
The Picture of Serenity |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The picture of serenity complex in it's simplicity I do so hope you do approve-- it's hard to have your face removed. But yes indeed, oh this is me, removed of all my mystery! Be it bad, or be it good... I introduce to you, Miss Hood! Up against the wall again, dreaming of my future friends. I hope you come again to read and share with me a stein of mead! So with a kiss, I take my bow, and hope I please discerning crowd. Bashful now, I show my face in hopes that I don't clear the place. (serenity exits...doing the soft-shoe...) |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ah put on some taps,, forget the soft shoe. And yes i am back to repling.....lol. Must be time for another one of those shots...What the heck am i doing up at this time.lol oh yea hard to dream when you don't sleep... or at least close your eyes. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dang it bern...there was SUPPOSED to be a pic to go with the story...gotta have a pic...my stories have no morals! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Serenity ... you would never clear the place, only pack them in ... this was wonderful! I've got the grins here. Beautiful flow in this lovely poem, I really enjoyed your thoughts in this peice (and the soft-shoe exit)! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh darn, I was looking forward to "seeing" you" Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Linen laced clouds on an azure sky Silken wings of feathered butterfly Emerald stars and jade moon aglow Rose washed horizon as the sun sets slow all these things I see in you I need no picture to know your beauty is true *kisskiss* me I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'I introduce to you, Miss Hood!' Little Red Riding ..., I assume ? You cutie ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your photo has been uploaded..It didn't turn out as clear as expected. Why not scan it again? [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, now that I see you....all is explained.... no wonder I've liked your work so long... a poet's delight.... stemming from summer's light! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You're beautiful!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Serenity...you are very beautiful...and so is your poem. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
well, lets see..... quoteing from one of the lines in my favorite Doreen poem..... can I kiss you. Parker |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Encore! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Way cool, girl! Good to see ya! Been wonderin' . . . Love all that hair! Ya, I'm a "hair guy". (It is yours isn't it? lol) Kraw' Krawdad |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all, but EGADS and YIKES!!! I've finally done it---I've become so Gothic, that I'm DEAD!!!! And Sharon? May have to use another pic...the boyfriend hid that one from me, apparently...and it also mysteriously disappeared from my "gallery" on the pc---and the rest that I have are of me AND HIM...HMMM...maybe I can just erase him? Hugs to all with a smooch for parker! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Serenty... I am pleased to finally "meet you in cyber person", and what a lovely young lady you are. Now I can put a face to the fantastic poetry, which I love. ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ my goodness, you are so beautiful!! I wish I had hair like that.... SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, sure....NOW you show me |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey... i tried... sorry, couldn't open the file... but i was hoping you'd put up the one standing by the car.... that's MY favorite... but this one's absolutely serene, harpo.... picture perfect in a mirror of sorts...... luvyou |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Sven sits in amazement at the revealing of serenity. . . he has only one thing to say. . . * wow. . . great poem too!!! ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...I should get out more often! I wish you all knew what a great warm hug you have given me..and I wish you receive back thrice the great big smile on my face. Yer all so lovely! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, its so nice to be able to attach a face to the poetry i read and i particularly liked your opening lines: the picture of serenity complex in its simplicity |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very huge and big smileys yuh |
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