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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Life (Senryu) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ^*^ LIFE ^*^Such a precious gift Life is dust in your own hands Don’t blow it away ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
YES.........Thanx for nice advise I love to nice poetry. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
And so well said A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful advice, thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I wouldn't think of it. Good write, Mysteria.  Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Waseem: Thank you for coming from India to read my little thoughts I appreciate it. bslicker: Nate Dogg: Thanks for the read. Auguste: I am so glad you say that so loud and proud, some do not! Thanks for reading. ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Never! Good advice! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Mysteria ... so much said in so few words, such a wonderful message encapsulated in this lovely Senryu, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wisdom abounds. Beautiful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
solemnly given holding ages of wisdom whispers rebounding |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Koko - thanks for stopping in! Kit - Life can be gone in an instant - just a reminder to savour every drip of the juice! Gentle Spirit - We are all blessed with this wisdom it is what we do with it that counts, and I thank you so much for reading. Sunshine: beautiful reply - thank you so much, such lovely words. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
was thrilled with your second line...very nice |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I too am in favor of the second line. Dust to dust... "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
faterider: Thank you for enjoying my haiku. Julian: Glad you liked it. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ You would know how profound I believe this to be~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yup! Gotta agree mucho! jwesley |
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