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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-04-19 09:32 PM

IF I COULD WRITE MY HEART

If I could write my heart
like the beauty of a
Rembrandt or perhaps
of a symphony of
the finest masters
I would write a
pallet of colors
and an orchestra
of sounds for the
world to see and hear.
If I could write my heart
it might be of the breathtaking
beauty of a tide breaking
along the shorelines
under a moonlight sky
or perhaps it would be
of a sunset against
a backdrop of mountains
rising as two lovers
take in the stars
from below together
for the first time.
If I could write my heart
per chance it would be
of gentle breezes
touching the face
of a loved one
so far away
as they listen to
the sounds of a
heart beating in the
distance.
If I could write my heart
of love that touches
my spirit and weaves
it's warmth into my soul.......
I would write~ of you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-19-2001).]

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-04-19 10:04 PM

This is wonderful and I think you wrote your heart as near as it could have been written.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-19 10:10 PM

and that is all that you need write. . .

beautiful D. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-04-19 10:10 PM

beautiful D~

Greeneyes~

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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-04-19 10:51 PM

GentleSpirit~

'If I could write my heart
per chance it would be
of gentle breezes
touching the face
of a loved one
so far away'

So gently written of feelings so deeply felt.
A wonderful share - thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-04-20 01:41 AM

This piece is so beautiful....great writing...sometimes I wish I could write like that but I'm too scared to try and I'm too scared to write something that don't rhym....peace!

Nathan

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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-04-20 02:37 AM

This is very beautiful and could only be written by a heart that is the same.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-04-20 08:01 AM

Songbird, I wrote it the way I felt it. Thanks. *s*

Sven, as always your words touch me. Thank you.

Lady Lauren, always you touch me with your words
and they mean so much to me.  Peace dear friend.

Marge, the feelings are my inspiration.  Thank for
your kindness in reply.  *s*

Nate, lol....always write what you feel even
if it doesn't rhyme.  Sometimes I find that is when
words are written best.  *s*

Michael, thank you for such lovely sentiments this day.
Your words touch me.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-04-20 09:22 AM

If I could write my heart
it might be of the breathtaking
beauty of a tide breaking
along the shorelines
under a moonlight sky
or perhaps it would be
of a sunset against
a backdrop of mountains
rising as two lovers
take in the stars
from below together
for the first time.
====================

wonderful imagery and devotion in this lovely declaration of your heart
this is beautiful GS...well done poetess

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2001-04-20 05:00 PM

You've written with tenderness and love ... beautiful! *S*

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-04-20 05:16 PM

1derful. Well done!

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2001-04-20 08:08 PM

JM, your replies mean so much to me cuz I consider you to be a great poetess yourself. Thank you very much and HUGS

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2001-04-20 08:09 PM

Suthern, I only wrote what was in my heart. Thank you for your kindness. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2001-04-20 08:10 PM

Interloper *smile* thank you for taking the time to read my thoughts. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

14 posted 2001-04-20 09:13 PM

Gentle Spirit, that is why it is so beautiful...because one can feel that it was indeed written from your heart. This is very peaceful and beautiful writing,,,,

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2001-04-21 09:02 AM

Deer, I am flattered that you have stopped by and left such lovely thoughts here. I appreciate the kind compliment given to me. Thank you. :}

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

16 posted 2001-04-23 11:07 AM

Gently written.......beautiful.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

17 posted 2001-04-23 07:47 PM

lol.....you know me well huh? Thanks hon. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

18 posted 2001-04-27 08:14 PM

This is so pretty, heartfelt. You have a way of expressing yourself so beautifully in writing.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2001-04-27 08:27 PM

Thank you so much, and welcome to passions. Your gonna love it here. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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