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Open Poetry #13

Memories

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-04-19 07:26 PM

Memories

a frozen mountain lake
and very few naked trees
hiding promises for times to come
and lonely birds
in a strange ice cold sunshine

faraway
the sound of a jumbo
in a different world

I miss you
lost moments of my life
I miss you

and when I think of you my friend
and our moments
every nerve of my body hurts

this feeling with no name
was given to me
as I stood by a small frozen mountain lake

some days come and never leave again
only crystal blue tears and a broken voice

I miss you

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-19 07:29 PM

This is very sweet and very descriptive. Come back down to the sunshine. Joyce

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-04-19 07:31 PM

Well, it sounds like 'mid-life crisis' time.

Time, we can never get it back. WEll done angst, Agust!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-19 07:31 PM

A haunting piece....but one that clings on....

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-19 07:34 PM

I liked this one a lot. Very nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

5 posted 2001-04-20 04:30 AM

Thank you all for your nice comments! AP

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