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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I am a waterfall Rushing with glee to F r e e f a l l Arms wide Capturing freedom Airborn and fearless To plunge within life completely Submerge myself in it's richness Release my fearfull edges and live
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write On! Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like such enthusiasm. Good job. Joyce |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love your free spirit, wonderful poem! ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Hey! So, you've become a waterfall...I was wondering where you were. Cool poem! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like the style here! Very nice job. Well written. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Really thought you waterfall to the river rushing down to the ocean....lol Glad to see your back..to the waterfall of life. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
flow on down the river of love. . .  wonderful. . . nice to see you back. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustAWoman~ Very nicely done ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Just A Woman......Waterfalls are free. Hurrah! Well Done. Bob |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Hmm seems when I attempt such I end up in one looney tunes like splat. Well done I like the style. [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thanks so much, everyone, for the comments! ATelamon - Yes, I was hoping not to hit the rocks!
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that's why it's always nice to have someone to catch you before you do hit the rocks. . . and now, to be added to my library. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OH yes, L I V E !! What a beautiful way to express it. Just lovely. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Under the crystal falls, A man becomes one with the rejuvinating mountain spring, As the sparkling crystalline liquid slides down every surface of his enraptured body. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you, Sven and Gentle Spirit, you're both so very kind. Eagle Scorpion - Well now.....there's an erotic picture indeed. Whew!
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