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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-04-19 11:59 AM

Misty Morning,
Dark clouds,
This morning
As I woke up,
I look at the time,
The time Is running by,
I was waiting for you
To come,
The you came along,
You smiled at me tenderly,
I saw something
In your eyes,
I saw clouds In your eyes,
I saw a dream
In there too,
There was a misty
In the coulds,
I couldn't clearly see
What I saw in clouds
In them,
But I know,
There was love hidden
Somewhere In the clouds
In your eyes,
I had seen love hidden
In your eyes,
I knew ,
You would love me
As I wanted to be loved by you,
Your eyes twinkle
As you came closer to me,
You took my breathe away,
When I see clouds
That surrounded my heart,
In your eyes,
I could see everything....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 04-19-2001).]

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

1 posted 2001-04-19 12:07 PM

Thanks for sharing your poem...Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-19 12:09 PM

Very nice!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-19 01:05 PM

you always amaze me with how you speak the words of love. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-04-19 02:16 PM

As I wanted to be loved by you,
Your eyes twinkle
As you came closer to me,
You took my breathe away,
When I see clouds
That surrounded my heart,
In your eyes,
I could see everything....
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such lovely imagery and sweet sentiments
wonderful sincere writing vandana
well done poet!!!!!

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-19 08:13 PM

Nicely done! Bravo!

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-19 08:36 PM

VanDana~
Just lovely, hon.
It is so pleasing to see you in touch with
those lovely feelings.

'I knew ,
You would love me
As I wanted to be loved by you'

*Sighhhhh*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

7 posted 2001-04-19 08:57 PM

Yes Love is always in Eyes.....Explaining itself to the word. No need to tell anyone... ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-04-20 02:42 AM

This is nice.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

9 posted 2001-04-21 07:30 AM

I enjoyed reading this. The eyes never lie.

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