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Open Poetry #13
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0 posted 2001-04-19 01:10 AM

A timeless tide,
Follows a rhythmic tide,
Waves crashing in,
Forming melodic rings,
Seeping into the whole,
It secrets left untold,
Knowing its place,
Is a crumbling glass case,
Sea gulls descend,
Salvaging the end.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)
© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-19 01:42 PM

This is very vivid....I enjoyed this   SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-19 01:58 PM

I like this it has a nice flow to  it.
Great Write!
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